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Never Is Soon

Help! Nobody comes. Nobody cares. Nobody hears, My cries of despair. Please! Nobody looks. Nobody talks. Nobody feels, So away i walk. I walk into the shadows. I drown into the night. Never to be the same, Invisable to the sight. This heart once scared, Now an open wound. As the blood flowley falls, the "never" is now soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/15/2009 1:51:00 PM
"the never is now soon" great stuff! Jim
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Date: 3/13/2009 3:48:00 PM
I love the line "as the blood flowley falls" ... thought you might mean "slowly" and then I decided it works wonderful just the way it is. Very clever write here Catherine and I really like the way you've tied the title into the end!! Well for "only 13" you're off to a wonderful beginning with your writing!!
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