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Never Hit a Potamus

Never Hit a Potamus Never hit a Potamus, on his grey brown nose. Cos' if you do, he'll flatten you, by jumping on your toes. For 7 year olds Contest to follow KS 28.1.18

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Date: 2/1/2018 3:26:00 AM
Great children's poem, Kevin. Children love this type of rhyme. Good luck in the contest. // Barry.
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Date: 2/1/2018 3:28:00 AM
Thanks Barry appreciate the comment, regards, Kevin
Date: 1/31/2018 9:29:00 PM
Very enjoyable...Reminiscent of ole Ogden Nash: "The rhinocerous...is impocerous." Thank you for sponsoring the contest (Poem - 7 yrs old). Looking forward to reading the winners and other entries too. Here's to less seriousness and more silliness! --Gershon Wolf
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Date: 1/31/2018 6:07:00 PM
Utterly awesome!!! Thanks for the example.
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Date: 1/30/2018 11:03:00 PM
Great one. Crossed 70, yet enjoyed.
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Date: 1/29/2018 8:55:00 AM
CUTE....WAY TOO CUTE....CHUCKLING ..
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Date: 1/28/2018 6:50:00 PM
Very nice...I think it's great...All the best Kevin
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Date: 1/28/2018 4:45:00 PM
aww this is such fun Kevin:-) hugs jan xx
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