Never Give Up

NEVER GIVE UP it's my desire to forget not to feel regret.. it's my will to accept not to forcefully exempt.. it's my need to burst, as i avoid curse.. winking to myself, telling "shuai shuai.." immersing myself, offering all to God... heartfelt, i will try and fight... soulful, i will stand with God's might.. valiantly, i will not give up nor surrender.. I know i can overcome all.. I refuse to scrumble or fall.. I will not give up, til i have breath... BY: olive_eloi, aug. 18, 8pm NOTE: SHUAI - SLOW IN ARABIC ----{>> determined me, evening..

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James Fraser

Date: 10/18/2014 1:58:00 PM

To progress, is to never give up. You, Olive, aren't the person to give up - James :)

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/19/2013 3:02:00 AM

Hi Olive, it’s a wonderful feeling to click on a poem and find such an uplifting write. You’ve tackled the theme with an honest shrewdness that is highly welcome - giving up is never an option. I’m certainly looking forward to read more of your work. Vicky.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/19/2013 4:42:00 AM

thanks for the encouraging comment vicky.. :) ill try to read some of yours too..