Never Ending Pursuit

Running in circles Attempting to make ends meet A frantic puppy

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2012 8:32:00 PM

to make ends meet. hahaha. SO CUTE>

Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 8:35:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2012 2:00:00 PM

Nice to read your write on this chilly afternoon. Light & Love

Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 2:24:00 PM

Hi Debbie, thank you so much for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo

Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 2:23:00 PM

Holly Moore

Date: 12/9/2012 9:58:00 AM

I love this! It's a perfect analogy, if you will....Thanks for commenting on my page..Hugs, Holly Moore

Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 10:35:00 AM

Hi Holly, thank you so much for stopping by and reading my write. Rollo

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/8/2012 6:45:00 PM

I loved the word play in the line. "Attempting to make ends meet" and then the punch line at the end "A frantic puppy" Very witty and inspired. Bravo!

Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 10:37:00 AM

Hi Jon, thank you so much for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo

Rollo West
Date: 12/8/2012 7:26:00 PM

Hi Jon, thank you so much for stopping by and the great comment. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/8/2012 6:17:00 PM

This is quite the clever write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and wondrous poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/8/2012 5:31:00 PM

Ah ha! I can see him trying to catch his tail, such fun to read :)

Rollo West
Date: 12/8/2012 5:34:00 PM

Hi Elizabeth, thank you so much for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo