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Never Always Sometimes

Never...Always...Sometimes... Lonely boy seen on a crowded park bench Looking, looking up, never look up! For once you look up you've given up, And you are never, ever suppose to give up! You should always stand up, get up, and rise, rise to the occasion, always have hope, always! Because without hope you lose everything, any and everything you always wanted, gone! Sometimes life is not that easy, life is hard, Sometimes you get down, depressed, and angry! But sometimes you need to kick life in the ****! You are the Boss of your life, life is not the Boss of you! Never give up... Always take control... Sometimes you just gotta kick some ****!!! bmdavey@02/18/16 Contest Entry for Never...Always...Sometimes...

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Date: 2/29/2016 8:29:00 AM
lovely poem congratulations
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:54:00 AM
A fun one! Congrats.
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/22/2016 7:21:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/22/2016 4:11:00 AM
Superb take on the theme n wonderful write n win.. big congrats Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/22/2016 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 2/22/2016 12:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Interesting and inspiring.
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/22/2016 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Susan I Ann glad you enjoyed it
Date: 2/21/2016 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your 'kick-ass' win. Never give up is great advice. SuZ
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/22/2016 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Susan and I need to remind myself these things or I will get complacent our down right lazy
Date: 2/21/2016 10:05:00 PM
Well Brian, this is a great "self pep talk". I can see you walking down the street repeating this mantra in you mind as you go through the day. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/22/2016 2:59:00 AM
Thank you and at times I do just as you said!
Date: 2/21/2016 10:05:00 PM
Hi Brian, congrats on your "NEVER - ALWAYS - SOMETIMES" win. ~LINDA~
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/22/2016 2:58:00 AM
Thanks Linda and where have you been the last few days by the way? Been missing you?
Date: 2/18/2016 11:56:00 PM
You really kicked some "arse" with this write Brian...love it...keep kicking "arse"...^WW^
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/19/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 2/18/2016 2:05:00 PM
You'd make a great drill sergeant of the spirit. Refreshing to see optimism among all the heart break here.
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/18/2016 3:30:00 PM
Thank you for your comment and a Drill Sgt. Of the Soul, hmmm. I like that and actually think it has given me another poetic inspiration. Thank you again..
Date: 2/18/2016 11:05:00 AM
you give some great advice...somtimes giving up seems the easier option but then there are always the what ifs....good write!
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/18/2016 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Sandra and giving up can be easier you are right but it's only easier at first but will end up costing 10 fold in the end.
Date: 2/18/2016 7:45:00 AM
Good One, Brian!!
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/18/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thank you so much

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