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Never Again

Depression seeps through my soul How can I write when my heart’s such a droll? Can a set of fancy words truly make him appear? Alas, it is never meeting him again I fear Would he not gaze at my verse in surprise? Would he not see it pour through my eyes? In tears I ponder upon his reaction Every line a bittersweet satisfaction I care not for evenness; I care not for whim, I care not for dead words, only for him Often when such words escape my mind, I try to see him in them, but he’s too hard to find In truth, I see less of my heartfelt rhymes As the clock striking seven heavenly chimes Pictures race in my frivolous head I see his green eyes; I hear the things he has said ‘Never Again’ are the words I now cry And my heart knows those words never die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/5/2013 5:08:00 PM
Dear Laura,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. My deepest Respect to the Breidenthal's POETIC Prowess I have just been reading YOUR Brother's POEMS. What a tantem YOU two make.YOUR descriptions are so above me, I have to look up have the words or meanings.Great POETIC Art. The more I read the more I LOVE Superb PEN. I'll be back later this evening. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 1/23/2012 9:05:00 PM
A very impressive poignant write! I really felt your heartfelt words. Hugs,
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Date: 1/18/2012 6:36:00 AM
i really like this poem, nice work
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Date: 1/7/2012 12:11:00 AM
I am becoming more impressed with your writing talent with each poem I read. This one also has great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 1/6/2012 12:00:00 PM
flowing in both ryhme and meter, I agree.
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Date: 1/6/2012 11:59:00 AM
meter of this is great! rhyme, is your expression, so sad, yet depression= anger surpressed. God loves you so much, Christ will guide you. signed, another sheep
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Date: 1/2/2012 5:10:00 PM
Great rhyme meter in lines 1-16. You have a natural unforced rhythm. I can almost assume that you love music. You bring the rhythm with you. At first I was thinking of the Kelly Clarkson son, but your poem is totally original. Great rhyme scheme (Unslanted) exact rhymes. You would probably grreat writing music. Keep up the good work.
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Date: 1/2/2012 8:19:00 AM
Sounds so sad Laura, got to get your new year in a better frame. The rhyme is great and story well told though, just hope it isn't written from experience. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 1/1/2012 5:02:00 PM
Very good
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