Never

A thousand kisses never touched A million touches never felt Endless feelings never returned Three words never said

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/28/2014 1:26:00 AM

You know I'm re-reading this again and it just clicked. The last line explains the first three. Without the "I love you" all those other feelings never could have happened... wow! I can't believe I didn't notice before... I guess I'm just dense. Lol!

Caleah Buil
Date: 11/2/2014 6:17:00 PM

LOL!!! It's all good! ;) That's what I love about poetry. You can get meaning out of it the more times you read it and ponder. Thanks for your insight!! Always love your comments!! :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/27/2014 12:10:00 PM

Your third line says the most... never returned. Interesting. Oooh the pain of being unnoticed. You know I enjoy minimalist poetry, but with this is left me craving more... does it have to be Never... who says? Keep writing, my friend!