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Nervous Room

I lay flat before the bending , way past the break Its a lot like love with that unusual sent , becoming vulnerable. Beside the notion against the hoursscattered , seconds which swril from focused beams of brutal bliss. Casually confronted charging in and around odd ponders. There`s a presence prescribed rising slow though sleek and steady. Welcome to the nervous room where our lightheadedness grows horribly heavy.

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Date: 2/15/2015 9:37:00 AM
Christopher, :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 5/5/2014 2:04:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Christopher :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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