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Nervous- Young Mans Perspective

Im working up the nerve to call her Will she think its alright? Well should I even bother? Maybe another day or time? Or should I go on to her place, So we can talk face to face? Or should I just move at a slower pace Im working up the nerve to speak to her Will she think its alright? Should I walk on over and use one of my lines? Or should I walk taller so she will think that Im fine? And then, one day she will be mine Yeah someday the stars will align And Im gonna tell her, what Im feeling Shes gonna look so, much as my way Should I make a move to kiss her? Will she think its alright? Should I move a little closer so I can hold her tight? Should I tell her that I love her and pull her to the side? If that works, I wont believe my eyes. You can call me a looser You can call me what you like She'll see that I'm different someday she'll realize While I'm standing at a distance I'm waiting for a sign And right now is that day and time And right now all the stars align And right now I'm gonna make her mine And I'm gonna tell her, what I'm feeling She's gonna look so, much as my way

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Date: 11/5/2014 8:58:00 AM
This is an amazing piece Manolo and the fact that you say you haven't been writing your whole life and was able to put this piece together is a job well done. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing. Regards "B"
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Date: 11/5/2014 8:27:00 AM
I havent been writing my whole life, so I've been thinking back on past feelings and emotions to write about them.
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