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N'Er Will I See

Me thinks I can't breathe without thine constant presence around me. Thou hast erased my very being when it's thine face n'er will I see. Thou will n'er know my pain in n'er seeing thee again. It will be a constant strain when it's thine face n'er will I see. Thou will n'er be in my arms and be filled with thine charms. Thy life causes me great harm when it's thine face n'er will I see. Now thou knowest how much it hurts me when it's thine face n'er will I see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/22/2008 8:40:00 PM
'when it's thine face n'er will I see.' is th clincher in your write. I do hate repeating but here it is beauty as emotions break to evaporate in a firm resolve. In true life I would say you should see the person if he loves you. One cannot fond love in crystal clear waters.
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Date: 11/20/2008 2:08:00 PM
You capture and expell such expierence with this honesty. I admire it, highly. Great Write.
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Date: 11/20/2008 1:57:00 PM
this poem is great. I really like it .keep up the good work Its really touching. I jus joined here and I findit a kool place.
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