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Neons Midnight Dreams

Soft music playing within the background Slowly brushing the stubble upon my chin While sitting beneath the reflection of the neon lights Colorful images broken amid the rippling of the fountains waters As the constellations quietly make their way across the night sky She, enters my thoughts again.... Passing through these revolving doors once more, her beauty, before my eyes ~ Time like golden rolex's hands, spinning unto a sudden stop Afore this spotlight, which absorbs her glowing grace Standing within illuminatings frozen moment, forever engraved within my heart Her richness, showered by these shining moonbeams.... Paving their silverish recast, before her polished path Amid these rays of warmth, emitting themselves, beyond her brightened smile Elegance which waltzes as she draws nearer, with her waving and wind tossed hair This aura of her radiance, piercing deeply, into my very own soul! Rising, to meet her gleaming beauty; as I extend these gently welcoming hands To embrace this paragons gift of her presence.... Pleasantly perfects, moment upon the threshold of serenities springtime breeze ~ Whiffling her glittering dress, while it dances about her silkened vanilla legs I kiss her brow and kiss her cheek, as once again through time we meet Within a crowd of a thousand places; laced, with the splendors of her love! What is fate upon this softened pillow? As I tenderly lay her down.... While I gaze into her alluring endless eyes, enchantingly Filled with the light of tomorrows dreams, now beckoning unto me ~ Silent words which whisper within these promises yet spoken Beneath her glistening pink lips, of all, that I shall ever need! Her song of love, is like melodic melodies caressing my soul with their fragrance As beyond my own imagination, is my love for her.... While she pulls me close; that I may taste her sweetened breath The air of my existence it somehow seems? This destiny~As it calls once more~This melding into its cup, of one Heartbeat.... Brushing this stubble upon my chin while I wait Beneath the colorful reflections of these neons lights Images constructed, amid the still waters of the fountains majestic Constellations, now reading their scripts, once written, before eternities stars Spinning this rolex of time, to a sudden stop.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Midnight Dreams!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/23/2010 8:00:00 PM
Very romantic. Never let the sun go down on your dreams. You're magnificent! When you publish your book, if you haven't already, please let me know.
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Date: 6/17/2009 12:04:00 AM
Such sweet romanticism from within your heart flows powerfully from your pen. Such a lucky lady to have ever shared such a heart and powerfully laden mind. A shame these things are not infinitive alas, but then memories...well that's a different story altogether...Hold on to the best of times...kindest thoughts, and wishes, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:20:00 PM
Before the meaning comes the cataract of words ... imageries postmodern and gushing with beauty ... out of a mind scintillating like the sun ... blazing its brilliance across world throttling the tongue for praise ... this grand mastery, Johnny ... light upon your faith for this ... praises ever, my friend.
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Date: 6/13/2009 10:56:00 AM
I am so afraid John that no real girl could match the one in your dreams. Have pity. Thank you for your too kind comments on my poetry. It is so appreciated. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/13/2009 4:14:00 AM
John, This poem began and ended @ Friendship Fountain in Jacksonville, Florida. Oops, I can't hear the soft music. But the rest is there including fantasy's dreams floating upon the silent night air. Why is not life as lovely as the dreams that fill our hearts? Perhaps somewhere between forgiveness and focus lies an answer when time stands still. I'm sure you can tell that your poem reached deep into my heart and mind. Your dream is serene. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/12/2009 1:41:00 PM
Time doesn't exist, John, didn't you know that? I've been trying to learn about this non-existence my entire life....Good dreaming, friend. Love, daver
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Date: 6/10/2009 2:03:00 PM
Such an exquisite and gentle poem, beautiful images and a delight to read. Very well done my friend. Love Heidie
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:54:00 AM
As always an adventure into your talented mind, hope you are well, God bless Ann.
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:54:00 AM
As always an adventure into your talented mind, hope you are well, God bless Ann.
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Date: 6/5/2009 3:47:00 PM
alas i too have let time slip between us my dear, thank you so much for the wonderful comments, they made me smile which is wonderful cuz today some terrible things happened. yes email me whenever as i have said :). this piece was another one of your amazing talent. loved every minute of it. your lines, your words, your views, replenish my mind, and take me to better places, even if the poem itself is dark :) this was very beautiful. all my love madison
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Date: 6/5/2009 8:58:00 AM
How could I have ever missed this piece of poetic loviliness. You have such a beautiful and deep soul dear John. This is so romantic and you paint a breathtaking picture of love indeed. Thank you for lavishing me with so many wonderful compliments and your encouragement keeps the ink flowing thank you so much dear friend, have a wonderful weekend John.
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Date: 6/1/2009 2:38:00 PM
recomment-my good friend,i read your comments and im honoured that someone lke you would find time to write about a simple girl such beauty,i dont deserve such goodness but i thank you for being a good friend and for your sinciere respect--reciprocated--thanks,this poem was already in my favs --charma
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Date: 6/1/2009 1:05:00 PM
hi my good friend,im sorry for the loss,im sure your heart takes time to heal but remember,we dnt die ,we sleep to wake up in the land of no sorrows,there we go watching over our loved ones,protecting you im sure your loved one is...,i have been in and out of soup myself lately,i ve been struggling to be here at the moment,but i do my best to keep on.you dont do soup so write here for you to see,you ll be in my prayers,I PROMISE- i ve already commented on this poem,its beautiful-GOODNIGHT
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Date: 5/28/2009 4:32:00 PM
Heavenly slumber tonight.....always, Christy
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Date: 5/28/2009 3:34:00 PM
Your "Midnight Dreams" are captivating, John. This woman seems to waltz into your head with all of her beauty and grace you with passion. The romance in this poem is so gracefully conveyed. There can be nothing closer than sharing a "heartbeat" with the one you love. Truly a joy to read! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/28/2009 3:27:00 PM
wow,breath takingly beautiful,it is a must to go to my favs,glad to read this jem--wonderful midnight dreams and soon i go to sleep,bravo--charma
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