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Nemesis

You could give a look to slay those that choose to disobey. You could choose sticks and stones and warn your enemy with crossbones. You could trick, trip and roll your eyes, bid the traitor to a duel, say your goodbyes. Still, when you are not in one accord - The pen is mightier than the sword. It draws a line in the sand, with ink, into the mire of words your enemy will sink, and not alone, but with his or her treasury of friends as they view themselves through your vocabulary lens. Like a volcano, earthquake or cyclonic spout your nemesis can’t help but hear your shout. 3/22/2023

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Date: 3/24/2023 12:13:00 PM
This is an all-time favorite of mine, Kim, and by the way of your best ever. I tried to say the same thing and fall on my face and told…you must get along with everyone and that there’s really no enemies here or anywhere. Of course there are. A poem that sings of truth. Wow this is a real gift, Kim and the favorite., Pangie xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 12:54:00 PM
That means a lot, Pangie! Thank you! <3 Kim
Date: 3/22/2023 6:43:00 PM
Really like that 'vocabulary lens' idea. Magnifying power to the 'nth' there! Neat! Sweetly and Melodically, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2023 8:16:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 3/22/2023 1:41:00 PM
Powerful piece, Kim. I heard a pun on that famous line: "Words are mightier than swords." I would say that when you take the time and effort to pen those words they are mightier still. Nice share, thanks.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Reason!
Date: 3/22/2023 11:56:00 AM
WOW! You are on a roll! This is a terrific poem. I love this one, Kim:) Truly a poet's poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2023 1:04:00 PM
Thanks so much! Some of these take days. :)
Date: 3/22/2023 11:33:00 AM
- An excellent poem of truth, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2023 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

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