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Negativity

The shooting star That shone so bright What is your will In this lonely night Bring those who wish And in false hope They wait around Only to mope Shadows are cast And soon will fade Ideas rising fast What is new to be made? When all hope is lost What is there left? Hopelessness turns to anger, war, and theft But is there hope Beyond these shining stars We reach new bounds Light years beyond mars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/8/2010 10:16:00 AM
Glad there's hope. I enjoyed that.
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