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Negative Love

Our eyes met Across the room The sight of her My heart went boom Her shiny hair Skin so fair Slimline body Shaped to stare I introduce Myself to her Her accent sweet Perfect purr Drinks drunk We make our leave Joining hands Like a weavers weave Late night walk Hand in hand The talk is sweet Of the loving kind We stop and share A dreamy kiss As we read our minds Eventful wish Back at mine I pour us drinks Moet Champagne To me she winks Close we hold Each others frame Dancing slow With this gorgeous dame Adventurous hands Explore each other Naked flesh Revealed from cover As i hold her close Her breasts charm me Pert icons Caress me My manly hands Run through her mane Down her spine To my wanting aim Her curves so arced Architectural gem As she gently strokes My wanting stem She takes my hand And sits me down Astride my thighs Slides on my crown Slowly we share Each others joy As we pant and groan This girl and boy Throbbing bulge Inside her heavenly cave To adorn her walls Our pulsing craves I pull her in As we release our flows Joyous moans As our bodies glow We kiss and enjoy Our united mix As our tongues unite With passioned slick We share a shower And lay down our heads Cuddling close In a silken bed I awake in the morning To a note left near Beside the message The drawing of a tear Last night my dear I was blessed like a dove Your my one night stand My negative love http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love2.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/7/2015 6:09:00 PM
wonderful imagery James ... shame about the twist at the end - great write my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 9/8/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Jan, this is an old poem, hugs James xx
Date: 8/7/2015 1:30:00 AM
Ah this is such a beauty James, Congrats on ur win!
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James Fraser
Date: 8/7/2015 1:55:00 PM
Many thanks Dr. Upma. Have a lovely weekend, James :) :)
Date: 8/6/2015 8:08:00 PM
James. Congratulations on your HM -xox-SKAT
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James Fraser
Date: 8/7/2015 1:56:00 PM
Thank you kindly SKAT, have a lovely weekend, James xox
Date: 7/3/2009 8:44:00 PM
Love the oxymoronic title ,this is hot! excellent write. This is another favorite of mine! I love your writing!
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Date: 7/3/2009 3:44:00 PM
I hate one night stands-Can turn out bad
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Date: 7/2/2009 9:42:00 PM
Brilliant very beautiful with a touch of sorrow...
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Date: 7/2/2009 8:11:00 PM
I turned all my one-night-stands into husbands ... LOL ... don't know which is worse ... oh well, its only life ... smile ... Great imagery !!
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Date: 7/2/2009 7:35:00 PM
The romance was marvelous James, but I hated the thought of you awaking to find such a note. How could anyone leave behind a man wish so much passion? Your "negative love" cannot hold a candle to the brightness of your heart. Beautiful poem! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2009 4:58:00 PM
Negative love is minus one. It was good but it's gone. The best things are short, bro. I relate. Good write.
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Date: 7/2/2009 3:03:00 PM
it started so beautiful,but i hate the twist in the end,i wish all good things in life to you-wish you a fairytale ending,but that is positive love--my friend you manged to write negative love so beautiful--and passionarte-its going to my favs--charma:)
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Date: 7/2/2009 2:46:00 PM
I like your expressiveness. Really don't know about the negative love. Sara
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