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Needle In the Hay

I get up at the break of day Determined to have my way But I’m just a man Married men understand That’s like finding a needle in hay She starts out all happy and gay But I know that soon something I say Will make her turn moody Do you think I’ll get booty That’s like finding a needle in hay If I treat her just right, I may If not she will simply say nay Finding words that are right Before bedtime tonight That’s like finding a needle in hay Guys, you all know what they say Where there’s a will there’s a way Am I willing – you bet But my chance I regret That’s like finding a needle in hay Mdailey 3/7/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/8/2012 7:50:00 AM
Nice limerick sequence. Thanks!
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:48:00 AM
Oh and good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:41:00 AM
Well Mike I have to say to get a good lay those words you must find somewhere in your mind Or like you say...could just be a needle in hay.....very funny limerick...enjoyed...Marty
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