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Needle In the Hay

Just looking for love after many years alone... needle in the hay .© Harry J Horsman 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 7:37:00 PM

HARRY, , Congratulations with your awesome “Needle in the hay” entry. Have a nice one... always~ PD

David Williams

Date: 6/1/2012 1:51:00 PM

Harry congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2012 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2012 4:34:00 PM

I am sure that this would be a correct Senryu..Enjoyed reading this eve.Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/11/2012 7:34:00 AM

Cute write my friend, one can feel who is in the last line of this poem perfectly. What I do feel, I have honestly commented you. Loved always, bl

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/8/2012 10:06:00 AM

I could be that needle Harry ;) this made me smile! Love it! Wilma

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 3/2/2012 10:51:00 PM

LOL I was excited to read this Harry.. It tells a story with so little.. I will work on trying different forms.. You all are wonderful on here.. Patrick

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/1/2012 10:11:00 PM

I love this approach to the contest. A lovely senryu. Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2012 6:19:00 PM

WEll, I don't care what they say, I sure do love the symbolic haiku!!! I enjoyed this a lot, Harry. I am glad to see new poems up from you today. Let me go see more.

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 3/1/2012 3:17:00 PM

Yes true love is hard to find because so few are sincere. Nonetheless, love in our hearts has to have expression, so those who truly love can't help but give, even if it is not sincerely returned. :) Thank you also for your kind comments to my work Harry, blessings, bren : )

Judy Ball

Date: 3/1/2012 2:35:00 PM

Do we ever really find it? Been married for 45 years. Poured out love towards others all these years. Never really felt any come back yet. It's a two way street. Good write my friend. God Bless, JB

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2012 10:27:00 AM

A profound senryu by you harry.Best wishes.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 3/1/2012 9:46:00 AM

Sometimes it seems so, but eventually you will get stuck.