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Needing a Home

My soles grate from cuts on bare feet eyes growing hazy, rattling a waif’s hum; and I freeze, quiver as night enfolds like pointed ice tearing a heart in scraps . A ruptured cry mirrors my dusky face, while weary thoughts keep the stars awake praying for grace to tide the lonely seas, when out there, street children drift on mud to beg, plead for a morsel of tomorrow. Can’t I be a kid just running along the grass in another time, another place tucked in a home, where life is more than grief, where laughter glows... a better childhood scene that’s not a plague? But dreams are gauze-thin, needing hope’s reprieve . 10/27/2016 For The Seeker's Being Homeless Contest

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Date: 10/29/2016 11:53:00 PM
Well expressed beautiful poem on a sad topic! Hugs!
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Date: 10/28/2016 5:25:00 PM
A sad story well told. Congrats an a big hug.
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Date: 10/27/2016 9:02:00 PM
Very heartfelt, Nette Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/27/2016 7:26:00 AM
Very touching poem on a heartbreaking subject, and so many beautiful phrases. I especially love the last line. This should do very well in the contest. Agnes
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Date: 10/27/2016 5:11:00 AM
Poignantly effective Nette, love the line, "plead for a morsel of tomorrow".
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Date: 10/26/2016 8:40:00 PM
Reminds me of the last time I saw a homeless man walking down the street holding his pants up with one hand and his eyes fixed to the ground, I couldn't stop staring at him, but did nothing to help at the same time, I regret that lack of action now. Thank you for this wonderful poem Nette. Though sad!
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Date: 10/26/2016 8:36:00 PM
Nette, your theme was kind of like mine how you said at the end "in another time, another place" Yes, this is a very poignant poem on children being homeless. Done with your usual finesse. BIG congrats
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Date: 10/26/2016 7:47:00 PM
You touched on a different thought, dear Nette....that homeless soul was once a child. Just as we were all children who only needed a chance to be happy and carefree, until fate stepped in. A different angle you have taken with your entry. Well done!
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Date: 10/26/2016 5:33:00 PM
This tears me apart. Deeply marked without going overboard--you are extraordinary!
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Date: 10/26/2016 4:02:00 PM
It is so sad. "Dreams are gauze thin" Beautifully penned, nette.
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