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Need You To Say Goodbye

Her Voice always outspoken. Unless it came to you. Quick to give the benefit of the doubt Only to see your deceit shine through Her Voice was ruled by her heart, Thought herself unfair putting you before all others hoping that you would care But yet her voice could not tell you goodbye . Your love took away her voice You have a hold upon her Taking away her choice She needs to hear you say good bye, You make her voice unsure You take her breath her gentle sigh Only you can take her pain leaving her heart pure
7/4/2020

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Date: 7/11/2020 2:26:00 PM
Congrats with your win in this contest. Wonderful writing!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/11/2020 2:32:00 PM
Andrea thank you!;)
Date: 7/6/2020 9:26:00 PM
A regrettable love affair shared through your illuminating expressions, Brenda, my compliments truly for your wondrous endeavors, achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 9:28:00 PM
William thank you so much! I’m so glad I’m back!;)
Date: 7/6/2020 2:50:00 PM
A beautiful write of a tragic relationship. Well done, Brenda, and congratulations on your #1 win ~ John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 4:40:00 PM
Thx so much John!;)
Date: 7/6/2020 12:23:00 PM
Congrats Brenda, on your well deserved 1st place win-- a most brave poem
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thank you I appreciate your visit!;) hope all is well with you!;)
Date: 7/6/2020 12:12:00 PM
Such a troubled and disfunctional relationship painted by your words, Brenda. You have perfectly described the inertia caused by abuse. Congratulations on your top win. Great to see you back!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so very much! So happy to be reading you again!;)
Date: 7/6/2020 12:09:00 PM
Wow! Congrats on your top of the heap winner in Brian's contest, Brenda! Cheers, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 12:16:00 PM
Gershon always welcome your words! Thank you my silly friend!;)
Date: 7/6/2020 10:03:00 AM
A beautiful introspection on abuse. Great write Brenda. Congrats on your top win.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 12:08:00 PM
So subtle yet right in view ! Thank you my friend!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 11:52:00 AM
So subtle yet right in view ! Thank you my friend!;)
Date: 7/6/2020 9:22:00 AM
Oh so sad! Sometimes goodbye is the only choice we could make. Congratulations on your awesome TOP WIN.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much I really appreciate it!;)
Date: 7/6/2020 6:02:00 AM
Awesome write--congrats on your TOP win, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 6:05:00 AM
Ahh Vijay thank you so very much!;)
Date: 7/5/2020 6:01:00 AM
Very sad story. But/and a worthy winner. Kind wishes, Kai
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2020 6:57:00 AM
Kai so happy to see you my friend seems like it’s been forever! Thank you so much!;)
Date: 7/4/2020 11:22:00 AM
A sad piece, Bren, one must not let their thoughts be silenced by someone else. Hope all is well with you. Happy 4th. Hugs, John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2020 6:56:00 AM
So very true John! Sometimes tho some give others too much power!;) thank you and happy 4th to you!;)

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