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Nectar When the blue sky fades appears the red sunset, Orange purple hues. Twilight soon descends softly to a quiet night, Men that burnt their toil through another tough day, Walk amidst majestic oaks Ferns and bushes, Sound of crushing leaves. Sweet morning sunrise, crops rippling in the breeze, A smile of content on face buzzing of bees, nectar of joy in the heart. Written August 1st, 2015 For contest "Nature poem" by Shadow

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Date: 8/5/2015 5:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Joy is a sweet nectar. Well done. SuZ
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Date: 8/5/2015 9:13:00 AM
I know this sounds silly, but the first thing that popped into my mind after reading your work is; how poetic! Beautiful.
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Date: 8/5/2015 8:55:00 AM
Perfect nature poem indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:14:00 PM
It is lovely how you wove Shadow's words into your winning poem. Congratulations from Julia, xx
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:43:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your win..... SKAT
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 10:57:00 PM
Thnx Skat for ur kind words!
Date: 8/4/2015 5:52:00 PM
a very sweet poem Dr Upma congrats on placing
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 10:56:00 PM
Thnx Shadow, delightful contests I love to enter!
Date: 8/4/2015 4:50:00 PM
loved it Dr Upma, many congrats....Seren
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 10:55:00 PM
Appreciate ur visit, thnx Seren!
Date: 8/4/2015 4:17:00 PM
beautiful imagery Dr Sharma many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 10:55:00 PM
Thnx for ur always kind visits n congrats!
Date: 8/3/2015 3:00:00 AM
Dr. Upma, such a delightful image! good flow as always! luck in the contest!~Olive Eloisa.. =')
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 10:54:00 PM
Thnx dear Olive

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