Nebula Nights:

Nebula nights, Upon starry skies, Capture my soul. /|\

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/9/2016 7:43:00 PM

A good first foray into a challenging poetic format, Rick. Kudos to you for exploring it. I will post my first Senryu shortly. Good job and a nice poem, my friend.

White Wolf
Date: 10/10/2016 4:26:00 PM

Yes it was only my first or second attempt at Senryu, got so much to learn on the different forms, Tar Freddie /|\

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2016 5:05:00 PM

Rick, you are doing this right... I don't usually enjoy senryu. However, this was perfect and you captured a moment, I enjoy every now and then... luv linda

White Wolf
Date: 10/5/2016 5:52:00 PM

Thank you for dropping by Linda, and I'm glad I did it right and that you enjoyed it, Cheers /|\

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2016 7:29:00 AM

I have got Don Mclean's starry starry night going through my head reading these lovely lines Rick:-) hugs jan xx

White Wolf
Date: 10/5/2016 7:46:00 AM

oh that's a classic song, I'm glad I placed it there now. I changed it to a senryu now... Thank you, and big hugs back /|\

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/5/2016 4:25:00 AM

Starlight haiku ... Nebula nice ...

White Wolf
Date: 10/5/2016 4:48:00 AM

Thank you, Probir. I'm slowly trying new forms, I find this one a challenge, /|\