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Nearby Sounds

NEARBY SOUNDS. Sound waves reach eardrum that is, a cocktail of cooler,phone, mixer,kids play,cats meow, nightingale's koo hoo. Dodoitsu form is a 26 syllable poem of 4 lines of 7,7,7,5 respectively. CONTEST:Sounds of the day. SPONSOR:Nayda Ivette Negron. 16/07/2016.

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Date: 6/22/2016 6:25:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words.....regards
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Date: 6/21/2016 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Rizwana:) A short write that incorporated many different sounds:)
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Date: 6/21/2016 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 6/22/2016 6:25:00 PM
Thanks.....regards
Date: 6/21/2016 1:56:00 AM
Thanks.....Regards
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Date: 6/20/2016 10:49:00 PM
Lovely! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/20/2016 3:27:00 PM
sweet write. Congrats, Rizwana.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 6/21/2016 1:57:00 AM
thanks,.....regards
Date: 6/20/2016 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Rizwana.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 6/21/2016 1:59:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your kind consideration....my pleasure to be a part of this contest.....regards
Date: 6/20/2016 12:53:00 PM
So many sounds in so few words in your nicely written Dodoitsu, Rizwana! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 6/21/2016 2:00:00 AM
Thanks for your rich sounding words....regards
Date: 6/20/2016 12:50:00 PM
Congrats on your placement Rizwana
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 6/21/2016 2:01:00 AM
Thanks....regards
Date: 6/17/2016 7:37:00 PM
Thanks......best wishes
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