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Near the Old Tree

There.. you'll learn everything Perhaps .. a girl will love you near the old tree And you forget this ugly world There .. you will look nicer, And probably you will write a lot of poems, And do not think too much in its names, Because the stars above you will be close .. Closer than you think !

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:15:00 AM
DIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2015 7:42:00 PM
Dheya, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 5/9/2015 12:29:00 AM
I enjoyed reading these encouraging words of hope for the future. A nice poem, Dheya!
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Date: 5/8/2015 3:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Way to go..Welcome to soup..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:47:00 AM
Wow!what an interesting and enjoyable piece,I love it. Excellent work.
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Dia Alshirqati
Date: 5/8/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your reading what I wrote .. I wish you all the best

Book: Shattered Sighs