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Oh cupid! Lower your bow and waste not your arrows on me i'm a knight of peace, my shield alert, and my armour is faultless i wish not to fight in this battle of love for my drive still yet remain lost in my fantasies i seek not the passion of a damsel dat dies with time like a rose i am no coward, bt hw can i win,when on this grounds, my father lost ? where do i get the courage , to fight as brave as a lion nd as calm as a dove ? why shud i fight when waterloo awaits me, after my victory ? that battle ground i shall nt visit, until d sun is blue for i wish not to become a victim of tears nd deceit

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Date: 7/28/2013 4:36:00 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:36:00 PM
Ajani, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
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Ajani Ibrahim
Date: 7/28/2013 2:06:00 AM
Wow.. Thanks, Linda. You are one of my favourites.
Date: 1/21/2013 7:09:00 PM
Ajani Ibrahim, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV PD""
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Ajani Ibrahim
Date: 1/29/2013 2:28:00 AM
Thanks "poets Destroyer", wow . . . .that's a nice name.
Date: 1/12/2013 5:24:00 AM
Ahh!!Enjoyed reading this morn..I hope that you become a winner in all of life's endeavors..Sara
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Ajani Ibrahim
Date: 1/29/2013 2:26:00 AM
Thanks ma'am.
Date: 1/11/2013 3:47:00 AM
"Why should I fight when Waterloo awaits me?" This line made me sad. It seems your character has given in without even trying. Assumed defeat can be the strongest defeat of all. Thanks for sharing!
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Ajani Ibrahim
Date: 1/29/2013 2:25:00 AM
Love could be Odd at times. Thanks for the comment, Maria.
Date: 1/10/2013 6:36:00 AM
Lovely write. But you cnt really know what you're afraid to try.
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Ajani Ibrahim
Date: 1/29/2013 2:22:00 AM
Thanks for the comment.

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