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Navigating a Mind

It takes a self to figure Takes a mind to navigate To have pride less bolder In bewilderment to never negate Time is a forever giveaway Promising half-truths and half chance A nightcap from a receiving day Have you a heart’s desire for wants? A will to come from strength drawn Have I the withdrawal to wander into? A path chosen to start believing from Have I the question if I knew? Some days I am sad, others sadder only Perhaps I’m more glad when I’m just sad Touching a feel to have touch only barely To times I have or perhaps have had And into my mind I can only dwell Priding myself in endless navigation To the finding times founded I fell I negate away that of awe to be left in bewilderment

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/9/2012 8:27:00 PM
Joel, wow , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD
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Joel Lee
Date: 11/9/2012 9:45:00 PM
And thank you for reading my piece, always :)
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Date: 11/9/2012 9:44:00 PM
Date: 11/9/2012 11:31:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Joel. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2012 5:02:00 PM
I am not a pro as well... but i'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Carol:)
Date: 11/9/2012 5:43:00 AM
Hope you are feeling cheerful today Joel, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth
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Date: 11/9/2012 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Elizabeth... You just did cheer me up :D
Date: 11/9/2012 5:19:00 AM
Hi Joel a nice little write here enjoyed it xx
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Joel Lee
Date: 11/9/2012 5:24:00 AM
Thanks Mandy... Glad you did enjoy it:)

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