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Navel Longings

The heat weighs the air down.. down... it say shoosh~ it seemed to steam as it wafted from white sand to damp the blue skies. Long green frond's stir the scene mint in a julep glass. Quiet invades each opened pore at high noon as the froth of salt foam caresses toes and hollows the sand beneath somnambulant sun worshipers. Gulls circle in silence as beads of sweat roll from forehead between the mounds of Aphrodite... into the navel of longing. *Woman God's gift to man

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/18/2012 7:43:00 PM
You have a beautiful way with words :) taylor
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Date: 3/10/2012 11:43:00 AM
Your title caught my eye and so did this write-- very captivating and sensual, Debbie! Enjoyed the vivid imagery you have here...Sent you soupmail, thank you hugs from your little monkey...
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Date: 3/10/2012 10:17:00 AM
I like this!
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Date: 3/10/2012 8:48:00 AM
wow, this is really sensual. Just love the visual. If you added in the moon, it could be for that tropical contest. Was that a rhyming contest? I cannot keep track of everything. I gotta go check it out!!
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Date: 3/10/2012 8:18:00 AM
This is Beautiful Debbie!!!! I love this piece...hugs n Luv Michael
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