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Naughty Spots

“Open wide”, said he, “wanna see what you've got Settle down, I'm your dentist, wanna see your chops Your mind's in the gutter” Then he started to stutter Began to squim as she nibbled his naughty spots © Jack Ellison 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/22/2015 11:59:00 AM

this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 3:49:00 PM

What a silly man I am, eh!!! LOL Thanks for the 7 my friend!!!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/22/2015 3:41:00 AM

Whoa! That one took a turn didn't it! Always love reading your page because its filled with surprises. XD Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 7:37:00 AM

WHOA indeed! My alter ego wrote this one... really! Love, Jack xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2015 11:25:00 AM

ha ha ha love your humour Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/20/2015 11:54:00 AM

You and me... The "Naughty" King and Queen of the Soup! YEEHAW Love, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/20/2015 10:50:00 AM

Here... John... Here... John... The only thing that could make this better... is a response from John! Here... John... PS. You REALLY are getting being naughty today...

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/20/2015 11:03:00 AM

It's all John's fault! I absolve myself of any blame! Johnny made me do it!!! Love, Jack xxx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 7/20/2015 9:55:00 AM

Well anyone who can say open wide as they lean over you has a job to be envied..lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/20/2015 10:21:00 AM

LOL!!!! You sure have that right!!!! Love, Jack xxx