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Naughty Girl

There was a naughty girl And what a naughty girl she was! For nothing would she ever do But daydream all day long! She wouldn’t eat her oatmeal Instead, would quietly suck her thumb When came time to dress for school She wouldn’t comb her hair She'd much rather munch on a cookie Scolded, run to Papa in tears When the school bell rang at eight She would be running late And when walked to her school house She wouldn’t enter her class! She spent a whole year sitting in her eldest sister’s class The nuns, they tried to bribe her With cookies and some milk There were times she’d eat the cookies But wouldn’t drink all the milk! She was taken on her first field trip To the ocean’s shore one day And Excitement filled those eyes That widened at the sight of rolling waves She screeched endlessly and clapped her hands in play! On the next day she went willingly to her classroom And was asked to write about the trip She held her pencil to paper and wrote Her very frst poem at the age of six

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Date: 1/9/2013 4:05:00 PM
Annalise, love the poem, and theme... a nice little win i see... always~ PD
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Date: 12/29/2009 6:32:00 AM
Aww, this is really nice, I didn't expect the ending--bravo to you for starting to write poetry at age 6, wow! Merry Christmas & happy 2010 to you Audray--thank you so much for adding my poems to your faves--I feel so honored ^_^ Enjoy your day!
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Date: 12/26/2009 10:15:00 AM
A good write one that seems thast it might be a window into someone's past being she's a poet. good job
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Date: 12/25/2009 3:22:00 AM
Audrey, many congratulations on your placing in Brian's contest, Merry Christmas from Bonnie Scotland >> James,xx
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Date: 12/24/2009 12:15:00 PM
So, the naughty girl is a poet! Very cute, Audrey.
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Date: 12/23/2009 7:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Audrey. Well deserved. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
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Date: 12/23/2009 6:42:00 PM
Audrey - Congratulations on your success in Brian’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj
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Date: 12/23/2009 2:39:00 PM
So from one "naughty girl" to another congrats on your winning poem in Brian's contest... well deserved win Audrey... happy mine placed 7th and to share the spotlight with a great lady as yourself ..blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/23/2009 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem and thank you for your comments to me. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/23/2009 10:44:00 AM
And that was the beginning of a great talent. Congratulations on your win, dear Audrey, Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/23/2009 8:14:00 AM
Such a heart warming story, Audrey! Congratulations on your win! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/23/2009 1:51:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Audrey.Rgds Brian .My latest contest 'A LITERARY LOVE AFFAIR is now open
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Date: 12/19/2009 7:07:00 PM
WOW! this is awsome my birthday was the 17th, the little girl turned out to be a great writer. Thank's 4 your comment and keep up the good work.
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:21:00 PM
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Date: 12/18/2009 3:24:00 PM
Audrey, Naught girl you, this is just darling hun! You wrote your first poem at six, bless your heart! This poem is just adorable. Thanks for making me smile! Happy Holidays to you and yours. Audrey I too want to thank you for you kind comments on sacred path, it meant a lot to me my friend. Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/18/2009 1:46:00 PM
just lovely and precious! light & Love
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Date: 12/18/2009 1:36:00 PM
Audrey you certainly nailed this poem - Hon both of your soup mails didn't come through - I don't know why it says something about a "virtual path." loved this poem - God Bless, mj
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Date: 12/18/2009 1:07:00 PM
Excellent Audrey, you naughty girl >> James
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:50:00 AM
Good write that should do well in the contest. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/17/2009 11:50:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Audrey.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/17/2009 8:57:00 PM
Nice write, a reminiscence to a moment long past that began your poetry writing. Awesome! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem today. Merry Christmas and happy new year to you too. Caroline.
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Date: 12/17/2009 7:43:00 PM
This is so cute and nice..Enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 12/17/2009 4:41:00 PM
Great write and good luck in Brian's contest... sounds like me a little .. I started writing around age 8 so kindred spirits are we... enjoyed your bio... blessings.. luv... I think u already read mine .. Simply ME on ME for my entry... this is such a fun contest... Linda-Marie...
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Date: 12/17/2009 2:43:00 PM
No, Carolyn, not all my life or I would be a pro by now!! Wrote my first poem at 6 years old, "A Day at the Beach". Love yu, Audrey
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Date: 12/17/2009 2:24:00 PM
and i suppose this naughty girl is you. still naughty. jhl
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