Nature's Worst

emulating time the tick tock of the rain drops… mud slide devours © Harry J Horsman 2023

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/15/2023 10:44:00 AM

Beautiful, lovely write

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 6/21/2023 1:42:00 PM

lovely write indeed

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/15/2023 8:00:00 AM

Everyone seems to be in such a rush these days. I don't know why? If only we could tame the flooding down to a drizzle, the world would be a calmer place... This haiku creates quite a dramatic image in my mind's eye... Really good writing, my friend! Hope you are doing well :)

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 4/2/2023 10:25:00 AM

lovely write enjoyed.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/24/2023 8:40:00 AM

Hi Harry, my poetry and Yorkshire friend, who knows, perhaps we are even related , Hunt my Maiden surname, powerful 3 lines - intense amount of rain drops happening over a length of time spells disaster, 'mud slide devours' - superb Haiku - hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/21/2023 4:11:00 AM

Harry: If we could only command the weather like they do in Camelot. Wonderful composition, SuZ

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/14/2023 1:22:00 PM

Hi Harry. It’s March and California having flooding. This is weeks of rain and no dams built to catch all the water. Our governor is far from bright. I hope you are on the mend. Prayers for you, Panagiota

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/12/2023 1:51:00 AM

Yes mudslides and avalanches are just waiting to happen. Terrific idea for a poem Harry and so well executed. Sorry its late to comment, I am spending tonight catching up on all I missed. This one is a favorite.