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Natures Valentine

Natures kiss sweet as pure nectar from honey bees With love willows bow. P.S Loving :) Val

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2012 5:12:00 PM

cute, Valerie. Belated congrats to you.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 1:55:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Valerie. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/13/2012 1:54:00 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Valerie! Love, Annalise

Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/13/2012 2:06:00 PM

Thanks Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/13/2012 2:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Valerie x

Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/13/2012 8:20:00 AM

Thanks Mandy I appreciate it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/12/2012 9:34:00 PM

Valerie... Congratulation, ;-) in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.

Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/13/2012 8:20:00 AM

Thanks for this enjoyable contest...

Sarah Mullan

Date: 1/12/2012 3:16:00 AM

This is so sweet and natural, really like this :)Love, Sarah.

Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/12/2012 8:34:00 AM

Thanks Sarah

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/8/2012 8:33:00 PM

Haiku has to be the most commonly submitted form of poem on this site. I thought I saw them all until I saw yours. This is about as sweetly descriptive as anyone can get with only seventeen syllables. I see you have nineteen here. Get rid of "the" in the second line and "do" in the third line, and you are under the wire without losing anything in the descriptiveness department.

Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/8/2012 8:40:00 PM

Thank you Robert..that is a fine looking pet you have there..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2012 10:13:00 PM

Sweet one, Valerie! good luck in the contest.

Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/6/2012 9:02:00 AM

Thank you Andrea