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Nature's Tears

From morning showers, Liquid tension falls to earth: Raining sustenance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/14/2013 4:37:00 PM
I like the contrasting connotations of "tension" and "sustenance". Great work!
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Raul Moreno
Date: 3/14/2013 4:38:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/8/2013 4:40:00 AM
Is this a repost?or am i mistaken?Lovely..
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Raul Moreno
Date: 3/8/2013 4:57:00 AM
I wrote it a few days ago
Date: 3/6/2013 2:55:00 PM
Nice Raul, beautiful words. BG
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Raul Moreno
Date: 3/6/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thanks, BG...hope all is well.

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