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Natures Mirror

Mirrored trees reflecting so clear, Mountains with snow peaks seem so near. Tranquil lake sweet balm for my soul, Seldom within a wave will roll. Natures mirror lined with sky makes me shed a tear. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 09.02.2014 REFLECTIONS OF A FLORETTE Nette Onclaud 1st

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 9/20/2014 12:02:00 PM

You put me right there, Brenda. A spiritual moment! Well done. :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/16/2014 8:44:00 PM

This is a wonderful winner my friend a pleasure to read.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 9/15/2014 5:45:00 PM

wonderful painting of your pen, Brenda! glad i read of it today! Congrats!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/14/2014 10:05:00 PM

your imagery and concept are superb, brenda...thank you for joining my contest with my big congrats and huggs

John Posey

Date: 9/14/2014 3:07:00 PM

You really know how to paint with pen and ink.... Congratulations ... Jake

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/14/2014 9:51:00 AM

Sounds like a place I long to be !! Beautiful picture you have painted.....congratulations on your win, Brenda!!

John Lawless

Date: 9/14/2014 7:58:00 AM

Brenda, I think I fished at this spot in the White Mountains, late August, last year. Nicely written, well deserved placement.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/14/2014 3:33:00 AM

Congratulations on this splendid piece taking top honors!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/14/2014 1:06:00 AM

Oh it's so very lovely Brenda! Well penned dear, congrats on top place win!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/13/2014 11:00:00 PM

Congratulations. I love this. Love and prayers, Gina

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2014 10:26:00 PM

Brenda, congrats on the top place win,

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/13/2014 9:45:00 PM

Congratulations, Brenda on your superlative top of the class win! Excellent piece! Pandita

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/13/2014 7:44:00 PM

Nice win, Brenda. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2014 6:23:00 PM

TOP of the podium woohoooooo congrats my friend!!! hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/8/2014 3:06:00 PM

Hi Brenda! This is a beautiful and serene poem reflecting nature's gifts. [Perhaps to shed a tear might be better than to cry a tear:)] Take care. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 9/13/2014 6:58:00 PM

Congratulations, Brenda!!! A top podium finish!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/8/2014 4:57:00 PM

Thanks Paul. You are right it does make it softer.

Joseph May

Date: 9/5/2014 9:21:00 AM

Beautiful write Brenda...best wishes

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/5/2014 9:36:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Joseph.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2014 6:18:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..I need to look this up..Must be a new form that she is exposing us to here on soup..Thanks for the visit with congrats..We have at least one flock of Canada Geese here where I live that don't fly away..I don't know how they came to be settled in our area..I think that the flock was this one and not some that fly away..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/5/2014 9:36:00 AM

Thanks for looking by Sara. Glad you enjoyed reading this.