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nature's cry

Listen to her sobs she is crying because of pollution for the damage that is being done. Hundreds of chemicals that human kind release each day poisoning the atmosphere. also they poison things like the Great Barrier Reef it lies there going grey dying over halve of it lost maybe for ever. Then the fish and other things become existent so it goes on up the chain. We now at more danger than ever before our planet is near the point from which it can not continue to recover. When will we make the changes needed? To have clean water to drink, food that is not full of harmful chemicals and we can safely breathe? Time I feel is ticking down faster and faster. dont let it get to us being the ones that killed our beautiful Planet

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/1/2024 4:18:00 PM

I agree, Shadow. Mankind’s insatiable consumerism is destroying the environment. Sad but true, SuZ

Bill Baker

Date: 12/16/2023 10:21:00 PM

A very mindful Narrative poem, Shadow. Thanks for helping to get the message out. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/18/2023 2:35:00 PM

ty Bill we need to do something and soon Hugs Shadow

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/16/2023 5:07:00 PM

I can hear the desperation and pleas in your words! I agree...we all can do more to protect our beautiful, almost sacred planet. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/18/2023 2:32:00 PM

ty Sara I appreciate your remarks hugs Shadow

Silent One

Date: 12/16/2023 11:33:00 AM

It is very sad what is happening and a lot of people are not taking it seriously.. this is an excellent narrative and great way of raising awareness...

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2023 11:56:00 AM

Ty dearest Silent One I know but I doubt they will take it seriously in time hugs Shadow

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/16/2023 10:54:00 AM

Strong writing that is conveyed well I truly liked this. It is deeply moving and accurate, dear shadow. When the pendulum turns, any injuries that it was inflicted must be mended by people's hands.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2023 11:52:00 AM

as long as it comes soon dear Sotto I feel we nearly are out of time ty for caring hugs Shadow

Lin Lane

Date: 12/16/2023 8:22:00 AM

Brutal, the humans who lay waste to Mother Earth. The hourglass must turn and only human hands can heal the wounds they've made. A needed reminder, Shadow.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2023 11:49:00 AM

I agree with you Lin unfortunately those with the power to do so only care about their pockets So sad but true hugs Shadow

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/16/2023 7:37:00 AM

Sigh.. You've so evocatively reflected the emotions of our nature here, how she sobs because of the adversities humans have committed against her. This write is really soul stirring and heart-touching, dear Shadow. Truly a fav, beautifully done!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2023 11:43:00 AM

ty Hiya pleased to meet and ty for your heart warming comments hugs Shadow

Ink Empress

Date: 12/16/2023 6:50:00 AM

So true and profound this is dear shadow. Powerful write well delivered I absolutely loved this. Definitely a fave for me. Every word in this touched my soul and flows in such eloquence. Sending you light always

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/16/2023 6:57:00 AM

ty ink so much your comments are valuable to me Hugs Shadow