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Nature's Carpet

Plush, emerald blades Fresh-cut scent strewn on the breeze Ready for bare feet Inspired by Carol Brown's Haiku contest, Springtime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/14/2009 1:47:00 PM
Beautifully written Haiku. I too love the scent of freshly mowen grass. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/15/2009 7:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem Donna, Emerald is such a lovely gem and color, but its closer to home for the Scots and the Irish with my write Blood on Emeralds. Thank you so so much for your kind comments, i am humbled>>James
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Date: 4/28/2009 4:30:00 PM
A peaceful write. I love walking barefoot in the grass, and the smell of fresh cut grass, oh yes, beautiful. Reminds me of home. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:26:00 PM
I can feel them in between my toes. Congrats on placin in the contest. Kat
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Date: 4/28/2009 11:35:00 AM
I can smell the cut grass! yummy! Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/28/2009 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest Donna...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 9:02:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Donna.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/9/2009 12:17:00 AM
Best wishes with this on Donna.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/1/2009 9:25:00 PM
Wow, Donna this is a gret haiku. Lovely image you painted...Raul
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Date: 1/29/2009 5:44:00 PM
This is so beautiful and lively.....:) Love, Sara
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:53:00 AM
This is so much more than visual, I can actually smell the fresh cut grass! So well written! I'm running free! Awesome haiku! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/28/2009 2:40:00 AM
Woohoo, my favorite! There is nothing quite like dipping shy winter feet into new grass, lovely image here, love, Kristin
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