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Nature's Breath

Nature's Breath Only a whisper Of heated smoldering lust Lingers like morn's mist

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2010 4:37:00 PM

Really like the imagery of this one! Luv, andrea

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2010 8:59:00 AM

Hey Jeralynn, congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice....Jimmy

John Freeman

Date: 4/26/2010 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations on # 12 Jeralynn. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/26/2010 5:49:00 AM

Congrats Jeralynn on your winning poem in the Nature's Breath contest... wonderful words depicting the photo ..enjoy your special victory..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/26/2010 3:45:00 AM

Jeralynn, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/25/2010 7:25:00 PM

good job J. C. this is a great entry to the contest!!!

Joe Flach

Date: 4/25/2010 6:15:00 PM

Wow, that picture suddenly appears more sensual to me ... thanks!

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/25/2010 6:14:00 PM

Jeralynn~ Umm very very nicely done! I enjoyed this good luck in the contest! Laura :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/25/2010 6:11:00 PM

Excellent description of the photograph...I can see it in my mind!! Great job!

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2010 6:10:00 PM

ENJOYABLE, THANKS FOR THE HAIKU,,IRMA