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Nature Spun

On a dirt path I stroll down with a smile There’s a foggy mist in the air about I must travel on this path for a mile They sky is overcast with the sun out The aura of this day is warm no doubt And filtering through are the rays of sun Trying to create a time that’s more fun I’m getting nearer to my final place A spot that sits vast and is nature spun It’s a beautiful spot this lofty space Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/23/2014 11:59:00 PM
A splendid place you've creatively portrayed with your lofty words my dear friend Russell. Kudos to u on this tip-top dizain. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing! Have a wonderful day! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/23/2014 2:34:00 PM
sounds like a beautiful place. Hope you're having a great weekend : )
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Date: 3/22/2014 1:46:00 AM
a lofty space. Sounds like poet heaven, Russell. Glad to see you back!!!
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Date: 3/21/2014 6:43:00 PM
lovely imagery Russell super pen I have missed your poems hugs
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Date: 3/21/2014 10:51:00 AM
serenity abounds in this wonderfully composed work, russell... i enjoy the positive energy of your words.. let the sunshine in.. terrific!.. huggs
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Date: 3/21/2014 10:11:00 AM
Russell, this is a lovely poem, so tranquil, we all have a need for that special space.
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