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I stand alone in natures beauty, in the woods by a trickling stream. I feel the presence of my destiny, as a repetitive eternal dream. I hear the gurgling of water, as it follows its chosen way, No worries of tomorrow, as it just flows towards the bay. My mind says, relax you’re never alone, the beauty of nature is all around. A fallen oak tree seems to beckon me, I acknowledge it and gently sit down. I close my eyes and calm my thoughts, a calming quietness welcomes me. I slow my breath, open my heart, and let myself to just be. I feel the oneness of all creation, and the presence of love that oneness brings. Then my thoughts wondered why it took so long, to sincerely seek deep spiritual things. The message I received, without a word, from a presence calming and maternal. When you acknowledge your spiritual self, you’ll be aware that life is eternal.

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Date: 10/31/2023 5:37:00 PM
Excellent, I could see, hear and feel every fragment of this poem. Thanks Bill, I will return to this poem often.
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Date: 10/31/2023 9:08:00 PM
Great, thanks for the high praise, Lee. You can FAV the poem and it will go to your favorites. Then it's easier to reread when you want to. A poet friend to be, Bill
Date: 9/10/2023 8:30:00 PM
Nice imagery, Thank you.
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Date: 9/11/2023 5:39:00 PM
You're welcome, David. Thanks for a first visit and comment. I hope to see more of you and your poetry. Bill
Date: 9/8/2023 9:19:00 AM
Tranquility in a serene environment. Nicely done.
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Date: 9/10/2023 12:27:00 AM
The photo does give me a peaceful feeling. I'd like sitting there in a canoe, so I could sense the presence of my Creator, as I write my thoughts in poetry. Thanks for the visit, Dennis. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 8/3/2023 2:09:00 PM
Dear Bill, I adore your soulful communion with Nature. Even the smallest awe-inspired wonders of Nature puts it all in perspective if we choose to acknowledge and appreciate Her many gifts with an open heart.. a deep rich and beautifully meditative poem, my friend. Nature sparks to my soul too. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/3/2023 4:28:00 PM
Thank you for the visits and comments, Susan. Life is good, how we experience it is determined by the perspective we view it from. Smiles ~ Blessing my friend, Bill
Date: 8/3/2023 1:47:00 PM
Awesome spiritual poetry Bill, though I would temper that last line by suggesting that eternal life is available... for the loyal ones
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Date: 8/3/2023 4:25:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and comments, Tom. Some would say it's the destiny for everyone; some will experience it as extremely pleasant, and others as extremely unpleasant. :-) Good comment does make a person think about the choices to be made. I'll be following your poetry now and hope we can develope a friendship. Bill
Date: 8/2/2023 11:02:00 AM
Such lovely feelings brought upon by nature. It is Gods design Bill he knew what he was doing. Thank you for sharing my friend and God bless you...
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Date: 8/2/2023 5:06:00 PM
And God bless you, Michael. It's always nice to hear from you. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Date: 7/30/2023 1:48:00 PM
Bill .. .Poem reminds me why ungodly are inexcusable, not to accept our God and Creator. Rom 1: 19-20 points out God's. qualities are clearly seen in Creation. Your photo encouraged me to paint again I cannot say anything more wonderful, than I have read from your friends. FANTASTIC! Thanks for visiting me!
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Date: 7/30/2023 10:07:00 PM
Painting is such a wonderful way to expressive your inner beauty. I'm glad for any part I play in encouraging another creative to express themselves through art, whether painting, poetry, or music. Thanks for a first visit, Barbara, I hope to see you from time to time as I will be visiting your poetry again. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 7/30/2023 12:07:00 PM
What a beautiful, relaxing, and serene read this is, Bill. That is really soothing! This makes me wish I was there just at this moment. I like the care with which you chose each word, but the final verse is really beautiful. A fave for me
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Date: 7/30/2023 10:03:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend, for the visit, kind comments, and especially for the FAV. I'm always honored to have to enjoy a poem I've written. Have a pleasant week. Bill
Date: 7/29/2023 10:19:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Bill, nature at its very best
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Date: 7/30/2023 9:35:00 AM
Thanks for the comment, Hat. I appreciate the visit. Have a great week! Bill
Date: 7/29/2023 4:32:00 PM
Epic, the last stanza really sums up a perfect message. At #25 of 100 Top Poems list and climbing. {I had to check it out}, thanks for your visit, Bill you made my day.
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Date: 7/29/2023 8:02:00 PM
It feels good to do something that helps another person feel good about themselves. Thanks for being you, Anaya. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 7/29/2023 2:24:00 PM
Holy cow Bill, you're giving H. D. Thoreau some serious competition here and I'm not being facetious. The poem stands on its own amazing merit, but the photograph only adds to the sublimity of the moment in time you've so eloquently captured. Write on, Terrell
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Date: 7/29/2023 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Terrell. I've just started adding the photo to a few of my poems and I think it helps to set up the read. Have a great weekend, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 7/28/2023 9:55:00 AM
What a gorgeous, peaceful, calming read Bill. So relaxing! So visual- wish I was there right now! I love all your carefully chosen words but especially the last stanza. A fav for me.Thank you for sharing. Peaceful wishes to you.
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Date: 7/28/2023 5:28:00 PM
Thanks for a first visit, Christina, and for the comment. I hope to see more of you. I'll be visiting your poetry soon. Bill
Date: 7/23/2023 7:25:00 AM
i enjoyed this tranquil read..thanks for reading and commenting on my work :)
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Date: 7/23/2023 1:01:00 PM
I enjoyed your poetry and will be back. :-) Thanks for reading and commenting on mine. Bill
Date: 7/22/2023 8:05:00 PM
My sweet friend, your words are a beautiful melody, simply caressing around, all that is me. I'm at peace. This uplifting and encouraging, all at the same time. Being one with nature, is the same as feeling His presence. Yes, he's everywhere, and my heart rejoices in that fact. I'm holding your words so close. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/23/2023 1:04:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend, for reading and commenting on my poetry. I can appreciate your closeness with Him and with nature. A poet friend in Texas, Hugs, Bill
Date: 7/22/2023 1:20:00 PM
A beautiful poem!
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Date: 7/22/2023 3:57:00 PM
Thank you, Paige. Sometimes they are better than other times. :-) Thanks for the kind comment, my friend. Bill
Date: 7/22/2023 1:19:00 PM
A lovely write/picture. Great ending. "True" Enjoy your weekend writing away..................
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Date: 7/22/2023 1:46:00 AM
May the peace that comes from knowing Jesus always surround you, now and on through eternity where we finally meet with Him. God bless you my friend. Your writing is beautiful. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/22/2023 3:56:00 PM
Thank you my sister in Christ. The peace that passeth understanding. Blessings my friend, Bill
Date: 7/21/2023 3:06:00 AM
Good Morning Bill. This is beautiful in imagery and poetic expressions. Your words and thoughts grace the reader with peace and harmony. That is a plus for us and for you too. Truly. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. It was a pleasure turning to your page this morning. May we all appreciate nature and what she symbolizes. Have a beautiful morning and weekend too. Blessings now and always. (smile)
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Date: 7/21/2023 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, my sweet friend, Lisa. You words are an encouragment to me and I am thankful for them. I hope all is well with you and your family. Have a pleasant weekend! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 7/21/2023 1:46:00 AM
Every exquisite verse of this poetic masterpiece resonates deeply within me. The vivid imagery you have eloquently portrayed possesses the remarkable ability to instill a sense of tranquility, assuage restlessness, and alleviate unease. These profound moments, as vividly depicted in your words, not only invigorate the spirit but also ignite a flame of inspiration and elevate the soul.
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Date: 7/21/2023 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, for the encouraging comment, my dear friend. It is a uplifting and thoughtful comment that I truly appreciate. Have a great weekend! Bill
Date: 7/20/2023 8:52:00 PM
"I feel the oneness of all creation, and the presence of love that oneness brings. Then my thoughts wondered why it took so long, to sincerely seek deep spiritual things." Love these lines. Simply beautiful Bill, this is one of your best poems. What peace and joy it exudes. Into my Fave.
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Date: 7/21/2023 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa, for the visit and the kind comments. You FAV brings a smile to my face. :-) Have a pleasant weekend! Bill
Date: 7/20/2023 6:25:00 PM
Natives that never heard the gospell find salvation in this. Reminds me of my old days surrounded by this. Papaws land.
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Date: 7/20/2023 7:49:00 PM
Interesting comment, S. We never know how tribal people of old communicated wuth their Creator. Have a great weekend, S. BB
Date: 7/20/2023 5:10:00 PM
I love every beautiful line of this poetic gem, but especially the final two. A fave for me, my friend. :)
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Date: 7/20/2023 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn, for the visit, the comment, and especially for the FAV. :-) Have a wonderful weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 7/19/2023 5:22:00 PM
Bill, you and I have the same kind of bond with nature. The imagery you have written about has that effect on me of relaxation, calming, and anxiety reduction. I especially enjoyed your last stanza because I do feel very connected to the Creator and my spiritual self when in the midst of woods, streams, birds, and breeze. Thank you for writing and sharing. Your friend ~ John
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Date: 7/20/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and the comment of our mutual experience when we immerse ourselves in nature, John, and thank you for our Poetry Soup friendship. Bill
Date: 7/19/2023 3:18:00 PM
I feel the same way. Nature can teach us much about ourselves and our Creator. And there's a peace.
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Date: 7/19/2023 4:54:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and comment, Tom. Have a great day! Bill
Date: 7/19/2023 11:33:00 AM
Such a lovely dream to keep having Bill. You are truly blessed. Best wishes from SV
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Date: 7/19/2023 4:55:00 PM
Thanks SV, I'm still trying to get some poetry posted. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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