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Nature Prayer

Above the grass, a-buzz with bees upon a mellow summer breeze, the morning sun warms by degrees and from my sleepy memory flees the smother of the night’s unease which led me broken, to my knees. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Might I accept that what one sees in humble moments such as these by skyward visions through the trees entranced by warbling ancient seas these secret, sacred reveries piercing, piercing, my soul appease. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thus, when swallowed by disease or trapped between realities oh might I grasp, and ever seize my God, I beg, I beg it please; the healing warmth of summer breeze to guide me whole, back from my knees.
5/13/16 *Inspired by (but not entered in) the Nature Monorhyme contest hosted by Shadow Hamilton. -Great Contest Idea!

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Date: 5/23/2017 7:54:00 PM
This is absolutely wonderful. A masterful use of rhyme. Well done.
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Date: 8/21/2016 7:00:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem. I have little experience with monorhyme - you made it very varied and interesting and it seemed effortless.
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Date: 8/14/2016 8:42:00 PM
Absolutely lovely. I feel like am lying with you in the grass. Well done G
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Date: 5/25/2016 6:30:00 AM
It is of no wonder that she is called, Mother Nature. To feel her gentle warm embrace and listen to the lullabies of birdsong, can be the nicest part of a healing process. Whatever the season or the weather, there is always something there to fill our senses. A beautiful heart felt write, Graham. Best wishes to you! Mikki
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Date: 5/22/2016 8:44:00 PM
G. such a beautiful write the flow, rhyme, and imagery or just wonderful. Eve
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Date: 5/22/2016 3:35:00 PM
I can tell you are a born poet with the ease from which your words flow. This poem inspires! #7 ; )
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Date: 5/19/2016 7:06:00 PM
Love the way you wrote this Grahamberger. Each line is flows perfectly. Beautiful poem. ...Fran
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Date: 5/19/2016 5:22:00 PM
Awesome beautiful write! May that gentle summer breeze always protect you from all that ails you. Hugs
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Date: 5/19/2016 2:02:00 PM
Beautifully written poem! Congrats on Premium membership as well!
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Date: 5/15/2016 11:39:00 PM
The Grahamburglar, now that we have audio, I'd like to hear you read one of your poems. :) The flow and beauty praised by your words are excellent. You have a wonderful way of begging for the sweetness of nature to always carry that certain warmth... I enjoyed. LINDA
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:39:00 AM
Wow, I loved this. the flow, the message, brilliantly constructed!
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The Grahamburglar
Date: 5/14/2016 4:56:00 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback!
Date: 5/14/2016 3:22:00 AM
This makes me think to find that warm summer breeze every night... To remember it is there. Profound and thoughtful.
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Date: 5/14/2016 4:58:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. =)
Date: 5/14/2016 1:07:00 AM
I love this poem. Read it 3 times, there is a great deal of emotion, relate-able emotion, in your poem that touched me ... CayCay
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Date: 5/14/2016 4:57:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for leaving a comment.

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