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Nature Interred

Wint'ry coats mingle With dirty roads, revealing Mankind's civil sin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/15/2009 6:02:00 AM
'wintry/mingle/civil/sin,' ...fine short 'i' assonance. A cool HAIKU Aaron! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/6/2008 5:41:00 AM
[smile] in a nut shell you were right about it, LOL
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Date: 12/5/2008 5:03:00 PM
my poem is telling the reader that all this working hard and follwing the rules of the life and the bible will only get you broke, hungry, and depressed, this poem is not true buts about stealing a pacaso, three other poems are the conclusions and i bet you dont even which ones,
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Date: 12/4/2008 8:11:00 PM
had to read it again my friend for it says so much with out really saying anything at all, what do you think of my poem?
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Date: 12/3/2008 7:13:00 PM
that wrapped it up pretty much and it is so true,this poem says what we are so afraid to admit. thanks for sharing it
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Date: 11/30/2008 3:47:00 PM
Intersting use of this concise form. Creative imagery forwards your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 11/30/2008 3:45:00 PM
Wow this so deep. The real winter? Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/30/2008 1:50:00 PM
Great haiku you have penned here Aaron. Love the imagery...Raul
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