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Nature In the Mix

daffodils--- spring blossoms happy smiles periwinkles blue attire--- blaze like stars the black hole grave yard for stars no headstones--- ~*~ 2/09/13 Note: For Gigno's Ellip Contest ( Listed under Haiku Form)

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/11/2013 3:02:00 PM

love these - especially the black hole

David Williams

Date: 3/7/2013 1:13:00 PM

belated congrats on your win...David

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/6/2013 3:13:00 PM

What a last verse, what a title, what a poem, Annalise!...by the way, I LOVE your first name...My sister's name is Lise...Congratulations - Tim

David Fisher

Date: 3/5/2013 8:14:00 AM

Way to go on the contest...and dido on the last stanza!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/5/2013 7:17:00 AM

Tis is just geat..congats .. love how you took to t a unexpected place. BG

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 3/5/2013 5:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this awesome ellip Annalise! Lori

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/5/2013 1:50:00 AM

Congrats on your win Annalise, i couldn't come up with anything for this one, and I am glad I didn't try seeing how good they all were xx

Donna Jones

Date: 3/4/2013 7:28:00 PM

Awesome talent :-). Congratulations

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/4/2013 7:00:00 PM

Love these and that last one is just over the top !! Congrats on your win !!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2013 10:10:00 AM

Annalise, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/4/2013 7:08:00 AM

Sweet poem. Congrats on your win. Connie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/3/2013 9:56:00 PM

Warmest congrats on this super win Anna.

Holly Moore

Date: 2/16/2013 5:22:00 AM

I really enjoyed your haiku's....all of them were very well written and vivid....thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore

Joseph May

Date: 2/11/2013 5:22:00 PM

very nice haiku Annalise...I like the celestial references...hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2013 5:01:00 PM

I like all of these, very creative, but WOW, that last one is amazing.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/11/2013 2:07:00 PM

Oh these are so good....

... Gigno

Date: 2/10/2013 6:09:00 PM

!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/9/2013 10:29:00 PM

i love those periwinkles and daffodls dear.Great haiku indeed.Have a blessed wkend