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Nature Haiku Iii

A wasp struggles Flapping its wings; Anthills are nearby.

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Date: 9/21/2016 5:15:00 AM

Very visual Haiku, Teddy. Well done. Barry

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/21/2016 6:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Barry!! ;-)

Date: 9/20/2016 5:35:00 PM

Teddy, i already see the ants carrying the struggling wasp.... enjoyed. LINDA

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/21/2016 5:06:00 AM

Thanks Linda, for passing by to read and enjoy my piece!! *^_^*

Date: 9/20/2016 3:25:00 AM

A great haiku...Poor Wasp...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/21/2016 5:05:00 AM

Thank you for enjoying my piece, Supraja!! *^_^*

Date: 9/19/2016 5:04:00 PM

vivid descriptive imagery Teddy! :-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/20/2016 2:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for enjoying my work, Jan!! *^_^*