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Nature and Me

In a beautiful springtime cocklight I woke up into a sweet daydream Damsel of God dancing in delight Staging her grace, an elegant theme. I was called to hug her in love And showered with her aspergillum Then a soft breeze to give a shove Urging me to dance with the rhythm. In a gasconade greenish dress Painted in flowers and flying birds Her ups and downs are in depress She a beauty, waiting to embrace. Out of the blue, woke from my dream I saw my sweetheart sprawling naked Her dress was torn and stolen in a gleam By a group of lusty crooked. They cut her ornaments – trees and meadows Her flowers vanished and so the birds She laid as a desert weeping endless Her tears dried up and so the lakes Fallen on knees I cried with her Nature and me, ready to revive A piece of cloth gone from the attire To be returned, for us to survive. Submitted on December 16, 2019, for STRAND SPECIAL 3 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 12/17/2019 9:09:00 AM
Wow! Gorgeous, eloquent image-laden poetry, Jenish. Wonderful piece. Classical art-poetry. I read it and see the story unfold as a painting on canvas. Kudos! :) gw
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/17/2019 9:48:00 AM
I'm honoured by your comment..Thanks..
Date: 12/16/2019 2:16:00 PM
Such a wonderful piece Jenish, showing great imagery and super rhyme. Excellent indeed!
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Date: 12/16/2019 8:56:00 PM
Thank you Gordon..
Date: 12/16/2019 6:10:00 AM
Awesome tribute to nature Jenish--all the best.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/16/2019 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 12/16/2019 12:04:00 AM
very nice Jen lots of imagery. Thanks for sharing
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/16/2019 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Gregory..

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