Nature

I have roamed the land and sea Life has lesson and tortured me I have let destiny loose and wish Nature has laughed at me What shall I do? What shall I not do? The mark on my palms are blessing, they said Life has had me colored a human That I have chosen to live and win My soul weaved like a web Complex, tangled and fragile I have met with fortunes and other Inspirations that sings

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:35:00 PM

Halima, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/16/2016 5:46:00 PM

Halima, best way to start the soup. Welcome aboard. Skat

Halima Taiwo
Date: 6/18/2016 12:04:00 PM

THANKS