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Icy winds howl loudly, on natures breeze, as forgotten leaves rattle, on nearly naked trees. Birds sail high, trying to find, a worm, an insect, of any kind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/11/2009 12:46:00 PM
Very interesting poetry you have posted today Christy. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/10/2009 9:32:00 PM
This nature lover really loves this. Very picturesque imagery of nature at work. Had you added a third verse about say, a butterfly or a bee flirting from flower to flower it would have made a more complete picture, at least for this gardener. Happy XMAS, Christy. Regards, Fred
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Date: 12/10/2009 4:20:00 PM
What a chilling tale! It sure made me shiver. I guess i like the warm weather much better. It sure is nice seeing you posting again. Blessings and stay warm. Ron
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Date: 12/10/2009 11:57:00 AM
Christy, How are you hon, I loved this poem and the vision it creates - The circle of like penned in a beautifully simplistic way - how is your son doing, if I may ask? Christy I'm glad I found you today - I hope the coming holidays bring you a wealth of joy - Merry Christmas & God Bless, mj
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Date: 12/10/2009 11:50:00 AM
Great use of imagery Christy, loved your first verse...Raul
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