Nature

The crystal blue fountain, And the lush green field The sky-scraper mountain keep one's eye peeled The beautiful flowers, And all creatures big and small Shows the magical power Of the God, who made them all..!!!

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/6/2009 5:19:00 AM

Wow, this is one of the best poems I have ever read, I can’t explain what I felt as I read it. Yeah, the ‘divine and magical ink’ in your pen is making your thoughts to glow on your poetry pad. I love this piece; it’s a great tribute to the Almighty God touching all the works of his hands… who created them all. I love this piece. You can read my poem titled “ he made everything” I will add this to my favorites.please change the poetry form to free verse, Keep writing with your pen. Adeleke

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/4/2009 8:34:00 PM

A natural anthem of faith and love ... like a garden the words bloom upon the eye ... a gift I thank you for ... the gift of friendship, your comments on my write ... the gift of the privilege to read your awesome writes. Love always.

William Kershaw

Date: 6/3/2009 10:45:00 PM

Crystal....Amen, what else can a believer say? Thank you so much for this poem and for your kind words about my scribblings. Your devoted, Will

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2009 9:12:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Crystal. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol