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Natural Love

Our love lasts way beyond the water streams Are more pure than the mighty crystal lakes Heaven cannot hold the love at the seams It bursts for us, the love is what morning makes Sun shines just as bright as what we contain And our hearts for each other, they don’t flee Leaving us wanting to ride each one’s train The mountain, made out of rock, is quite free Beauty of this scene is unlike most views The love that we have covers all of it The substance of life, green grass quite imbues Fills any hole with the sweetest love bit I feel the beauty of this land in me Top to bottom nature’s all I can see Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/7/2014 10:35:00 AM
Russell.....ahhhh..I always feel better after reading your poems....this is beautiful....
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Date: 2/4/2014 12:19:00 AM
This is a natural example of a well-written sonnet poem. Good work again Russell.
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:08:00 PM
Very romantic work for the month of February the Valentine month..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2014 5:26:00 PM
Ine more time you have written a beautiful poem and all that love of beauty is free. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 2/3/2014 12:30:00 PM
Russell, amazing when love come naturally, nature the best part of waking up. SKAT
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Date: 2/3/2014 12:25:00 PM
I always fall for your work,imaging this: ''I feel the beauty of this land in me Top to bottom nature’s all I can see''. Excellent Russell. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:36:00 AM
This utterly outstanding Russell. You really out di yourself today..Thanks for brightening up my morning......Tim
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:25:00 AM
poignant Russell you depict nature very well love this pen kudos Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 2/3/2014 3:24:00 AM
- Russell my friend - this poem only need one word: BEAUTIFUL!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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