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Natural Forces

. nature intervenes atmospheric arrow parts - spring kiss prevented .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/19/2010 7:09:00 PM
Reminds me of the power of a missed kiss...that I really wanted.
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Date: 5/17/2010 9:59:00 AM
well done, strong choice of words to describe a passing by,..p.d.
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Date: 5/16/2010 9:01:00 PM
That must be why weve had so much rain this spring. Nice one Abe. BG
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:36:00 AM
Nice images aptly interpreted. A real haiku
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Date: 5/15/2010 10:41:00 PM
Ow my I can feel that atmospheric arrow..great great Haiku with a prevented Kiss,Charma.
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