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Native British Rant

Politicians abandon native life, Trouble rising, Broken lands civil strife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/12/2013 6:50:00 PM
Hi DN I thought you did a great job on your1st short poem, im not that brave lol:) Its a great thing when we can challenge ourselves& try something new,, im still learning to try new styles weather, short or long. I am not there yet.and I agree with its message. The truth needs no help... Ty4sharing Cheriex
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Date: 11/24/2012 3:00:00 PM
David... I'm sad to see the comment on the bottom... about your poem...much to pounder when one loses all meaning to ones trueself... life is only what we make of it...yes politicians and the little word "MESS" ...good verse...luv..Linda
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Date: 11/24/2012 10:54:00 AM
i agree David, after spending the last 45 years away from the land of my birth, i come back and u'k is in dire straits, it politiciuans, are rubbish and should be hung for their insensitivity.. the comment you received below, is a produce of what you write about..
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