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Nation of death

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Nation of death





The death nation
Made  for the fear a new sensation
No words, no talks , no negotiation
Well seeing is believing
Heaven  is our motivation
Yesterday it was asleep
Today nothing is gonna keep
The death nation
Rising above every situation
A nation who loves death , it's not any more a myth

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  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:06:00 AM
    The idea here is wonderfully provocative but the rhythm is all over the place for me. It may be my dialect or something else. I really like the subject and you have some great lines but the punctuation is off too. Maybe, "no words, no talk, no negotiations". I also think you should break the last line into two to keep the short quick pace that you earlier set.

    Hamad Avatar Hammam Hamad
    Date: 2/26/2012 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I hope this idea turns to actions Regards,
  1. Date: 2/26/2012 9:29:00 AM
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