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Natalie At 14

Watching her grow and remembering me As a teen of changeable mood. Seeing her thrive and thankfully so - yet As her parent I’ll need to stay shrewd. From a spiky-haired smiler at 7 months old To a graceful and slender fourteen. She has bloomed through the years in so many ways That even I could have never foreseen. When I was her age, I thought I was so smart And, in some ways, l see now I was right. Now it’s her turn to venture further into the world – Face big choices when out of my sight. True, babies will test you in myriad ways Utter dependence, refusal to nap…. Dealing with food, diapers, doctors and daycare Juggling those almost seems like a snap. For next week, my first baby heads to high school Whether or not she and I both feel ready. But I know she’ll do great (even envy her some) May she be ever brave, kind and steady.

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Date: 3/9/2011 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Joni. Love Carol
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:10:00 PM
Lovely poetry about your daughter. She'll be fine in High School. With a loving family around her and true friends, it's the best recipe for her tomorrow's. A warm welcome to poetry Soup to you....:)
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:07:00 PM
Ah ha ... I caught you!!!! This is beautiful!!! Why is there no more? Give me more ... give me more ... I dare you to. Joe
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Joni. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jodi. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2010 12:19:00 PM
They grow up so quick. My son is 6 going on 30. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 8/21/2010 2:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more..with luv..
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