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Nascent Warmth

Wrapped in a bubbling liquid sack I grew, zero vision for my tiny eyes hazel blue, all I'd seen-- a dark floating tube to breathe, I heard muffled voices again beginning to seethe. Calmed by a gentle touch of love on stormy nights, I awaited to find it the day I'd step into lights. Ah! Pulled out into blinding white flashing sheets, a beautiful world welcomed my racing naive heartbeats. She cocooned me with love in her warm shivering arms, velvet touch into my existence whispers with charms, my blue eyes sparkle in a topaz gleam of soothing hope, her finger holds my tiny hand with a promise to cope. Assurance flows from her honeyed voice I have known in mother's mellowed lullabies for nine months I've flown, she wraps me in a starry blanket of warm cozy delight, my beady eyes shine with wonder as I cuddle her tight. July 22, 2020 JUST A MOMENT Poetry Contest Sponsor: John lawless ~Winner: 13th Place

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Date: 8/5/2020 9:44:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats, Aditi
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Date: 8/5/2020 8:13:00 AM
What a beautiful poem! Congratulations Aditi.
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Date: 8/4/2020 10:20:00 PM
I forgot to mention in my earlier comment that I have added this gem to my faves. I know I will love it each time I reread it. Congratulations for your win, my friend!
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Date: 8/4/2020 9:37:00 PM
Oh Aditi, this is just lovely, filled with images creating pictures of the sweetest reality for a newborn child - seeing the face of her mother after hearing her voice for nine months. This poem just cuddles us in the nascent warmth of the womb! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/4/2020 3:08:00 PM
Beautiful poem with a really interesting title that grabbed my attention. Glad to see this on the winners' list, Aditi.
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Date: 8/4/2020 6:31:00 AM
Superbly penned ~ congrats on your win, Aditi.
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Date: 8/4/2020 5:51:00 AM
...LET THE MOMENT'S BEGIN. Very unique take on the theme Aditi. thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 7/23/2020 11:07:00 PM
Aditi, your imagination has taken flight with your depiction of the journey from in utero security to postnatal awakening. As always, your gratitude to your parents is so warmly conveyed, and your poetic prowess is unparalleled. Such an inspiring write, dear friend ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:49:00 AM
I am glad you loved the message of my muse dear friend. Thank you for appreciating it generously. You are really kind :)
Date: 7/23/2020 7:18:00 PM
This poem exudes eloquence. Gorgeously penned.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:48:00 AM
Glad you loved it Caren. Thank you for your kind wishes :)
Date: 7/23/2020 3:11:00 PM
You never disappoint, Aditi:-) This poem join a very long list of your masterpieces! Good luck in the contest!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:48:00 AM
Thank you for such generous appreciation and kind wishes Edward! :)
Date: 7/22/2020 10:16:00 PM
Like a river of emotions, your poem flowing from the pen to the hearts.. Wonderful write Aditi.. Good luck..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:47:00 AM
I am glad you loved my muse Jenish! Thank you for your appreciation and wishes :)

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